twiddle

Feb. 3rd, 2003 12:32 pm
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"Water"

I want it.

I want what she holds in her smooth exotic self. I strut, I display, I flick my beauty at her, and she remains unimpressed.

I will offer her a gift, this shiny little stone - clink - she accepts it, but it's not enough.

She is far from sated.

Beloved, I am singing my need to you. I will die without you. I falter at your side, I thirst for you and, frantic, I fill you with all I can gather.

clink
clink


Something in her is stirring, a liquid acquiescence. She begins to reveal her dark secret self - she pours herself forth, and I plunge quickly inside, consuming the essence of what she contains.

She is drained; I am saved; I caress her with wings; I leave Heaven to replenish what I have stolen away.
~~~
Or:
She is drained; I am saved; I caress her with wings as I leave her to
replenish herself.

Date: 2003-02-04 04:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frostythesuperv.livejournal.com
No, no. Once I knew what it was about, I got it. But I'm sort of feeble from time to time, so I would have missed it if I didn't know.

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Date: 2003-02-04 06:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] elionwyr.livejournal.com
Ok, good.
Thank you for the feedback. It's appreciated. :)

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