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elionwyr ([personal profile] elionwyr) wrote2009-10-04 09:59 pm
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twiddle

(For those new to this, "twiddle" is my word for these fragments of stories. Most of the fairy tales are more thorough than this; click on the tag to read those.)

"Masks"

His mouth on my hand, his breath on my skin – I shiver, and try to hide it, and masks slide across his face before he asks the same question he asks every night.

Mystery, mystery. He walks through my dreams as I walk through this house, a cautious exploration of intersecting worlds and undefined intentions.

There are spaces beasts possess in the world and in our minds. I feel his claws in places I thought were mine alone. He moves through my almost-sleep and, shaken, I bare my throat to him as he passes by.

One day, I find him hunting. He kisses me, flicks my knees apart; then stalks off, glancing back a promise. I trace the memory of passion, my lips still bearing the weight and heat of him; I watch him prowl the forest and, not-quite-prey, I stay behind.

We repeat this dance for ages.

And oh, you are the monster because this world tells us that you are. But when I press fingers to my flesh, I feel the fur hiding underneath.

How long before he discovers I am the more dangerous of the beasts?

[identity profile] briansiano.livejournal.com 2009-10-05 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
Not bad.

Mind if I send you a writing fragment?
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[identity profile] elionwyr.livejournal.com 2009-10-05 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Surely. :)

[identity profile] octoberland.livejournal.com 2009-10-05 02:33 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. WANT MORE.
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[identity profile] elionwyr.livejournal.com 2009-10-05 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
Yeeeeah, me too.

My writing muscles are very out of shape. I'm lucky to get 600 words out. It's incredibly frustrating...apparently, divorce fries one's ability to write.

But..thank you for liking! *smooch*

[identity profile] octoberland.livejournal.com 2009-10-05 04:49 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, you know what you should do? Send this to Circlet as a microfiction submission. Just saying. :)

Kisses back at you.
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[personal profile] celtic_maenad 2009-10-05 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. That's... wonderful. I like it a lot.
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[identity profile] elionwyr.livejournal.com 2009-10-05 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :)