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elionwyr ([personal profile] elionwyr) wrote2007-08-29 12:20 pm
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story cards twiddle

This snippet of fiction is for [livejournal.com profile] artfulruin and her story cards frog, son, gift.
(I *think* it's over 100 words..)


Fealty


My finger traces idle patterns on the surface of the pond. Greenish-brown tendrils of slimy somethings cling to my nail, break away behind me, leaving glimpses of water that is far from wholesome.

I am waiting for him.

His eyes break through the algae, demanding I meet his gaze. Panicked insects stop their chorus, needlessly. They are not his prey.

Webbed feet grab the ground beside me. He pulls himself from the pond, settling next to me in a puddle of slime and incandescence. His head nearly comes to my shoulder; he reeks of decay and stagnant water.

"Princess."

Father tells me I should never allow myself to be common. And so I do not run screaming, nor does my face reveal my thoughts. "The Pact."

The monster blinks, stretches. The claws of his foot hook onto the fabric protecting my stomach from his touch.

I do not wait for his question.

"Seven and a half months. He will be yours."

"And we will be yours."

He licks his lips.

[identity profile] themaskmaker.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeee. *shiver*

Good one.
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[identity profile] elionwyr.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 04:56 pm (UTC)(link)
*stops holding breath*

I'll have you know I was sitting here hitting 'refresh' over and over, hoping you'd read this nownownow.

Thank you. *hug*

[identity profile] themaskmaker.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
D'aaaawww, really? That makes me feel good.

*smooch*

It's quite... good. I hate it, that's how good it is. The whole time, I'm thinking, ohno...nonono.
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[identity profile] elionwyr.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
My creative writing muscles are very underused at this point. So thank you for the idea and the cards! I'm very glad you like. :)

And yes, really.
*more hugs*

And I should hopefully have your dreamcatcher done by Friday. Email me your addy, pretty please..?

[identity profile] missmelysse.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 05:42 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so deliciously creepy.
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[identity profile] elionwyr.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 05:48 pm (UTC)(link)
:D

Thank you!

[identity profile] shadesong.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooooh.

I love this.

More!

[identity profile] shadesong.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm serious, you know. Well done, and deliciously creepy.
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[identity profile] elionwyr.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 06:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, kiri.

There's more sorta percolating. We'll see what comes of it..

[identity profile] feste-sylvain.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
This seems like the back cover of a book that would give me nightmares.

Believe me, I mean this in a good way.

[identity profile] softlywhispered.livejournal.com 2007-08-29 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
What are these "Story cards" you speak of? nad it's very cute..