Mar. 15th, 2011 12:37 am
elionwyr: (barefoot)
[personal profile] elionwyr

Nothing I say will convince you.

You, whom the very stars fail to outshine; you, full of grace and mystery enough to outlast lifetimes; you, my brilliant darling, unable to see your Self through your fears.

You gaze into my unseen eyes and ask me to confirm what you wish to be true, what you will never be able to believe.

You are loved.
You are inspiration.
You are amazement and perfection.

I cannot find the words to convince you, my Queen. I whisper through the stillness of what separates our worlds and like sunlight through the water, my words refract and change into something you refuse to hear.

You are amazing.
You are beautiful.
You are precious, rarified, glorious.

And still you ask again, until I could weep from frustration if tears were allowed to me.

You are ever fairest of them all.
And you'll never, ever know.

Date: 2011-03-15 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
OOH!!! Please tell me you're submitting this somewhere?!

Date: 2011-03-15 04:50 am (UTC)
ext_4696: (Default)
From: [identity profile]
I...don't know. I just wrote it.

Date: 2011-03-15 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
*I hope, I hope, I hope* :+D

Date: 2011-03-15 05:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
(((heart esplodey)))

Date: 2011-03-15 05:08 am (UTC)
ext_4696: (batlove)
From: [identity profile]
*snuggle pouncy-hug*

Date: 2011-03-15 11:02 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-03-15 01:46 pm (UTC)
ext_4831: My Headshot (Friend)
From: [identity profile]
This leaves me speechless.

Now, if you will excuse me, I have something in my eye. *sniff*

May I share this?

Date: 2011-03-15 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
hughcasey sent me and, um, Wow...just wow.

Date: 2011-03-15 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amy hoffman (from
Wow Hun, That's beautiful...


Date: 2011-03-15 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
And you'll never, ever know.

Like hell, we'll let you knwo this one. You need to do a poetry book.

Date: 2011-03-15 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Someday you will see yourself clearly and believe, until then my friend look at yourself through our eyes. We see a beautiful compassionate human being.

Date: 2011-03-17 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
As other's have said, this should be subbed or put into your own poetry book.

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